Just finished reading through. The confrontation between Carla and Tate kept me glued to the text. The ending is perfect. Liv's healing but inability to return to work felt very true. I'm glad she was able to see that some good had come from all the horror, even though that didn't mean she went on unaffected. I'm happy she and Wells end up together. And the fact that Tate's body was never recovered is chilling. Reminds me of Silence of the Lambs. This was excellent work, Jim
Not generally a crime fiction guy, but. . .what a read, Jim. You pulled us in all sorts of ways; didn't see that great ending coming. Great characters and terrible bad guys! Enjoy your new year.
Really appreciate the kind words, recommendation and upgrade Ron. I will do my best to earn the trust in me you've shown. Made my week. So glad you liked the story, especially in a genre you don't necessarily prefer. Thanks again for restoring some confidence that wanes sometimes. - Jim
Very welcome, Jim. I'm a bit on the sensitive side and good writing can really amplify that; but it is what it is! This is my first deep dive into your writing and respect here, Jim.
You can't beat a resurrection for an ending. I did not see that coming, in cutoffs or otherwise. Beautiful epilogue, Jim. Loose needed something like that. You did sneak in one disturbing detail: Tate Diller's body was not recovered. Could he still be out there? Can I expect a sequel? :)
Haha, I don't even want to think about a sequel right now to be honest K.C. - I loved writing Loose but man, it's time to move on. At least for now. Sure do appreciate you reading. - Jim
Oh, thank you Jim. I picked up on Liv's "realistic dreams of losing Wells". I noticed right away that you did not say simply "losing Wells'. But, then, I was looking for a clue, hoping you would keep him alive for those of us who crave a happy ending sometimes . Great story!
Just finished reading through. The confrontation between Carla and Tate kept me glued to the text. The ending is perfect. Liv's healing but inability to return to work felt very true. I'm glad she was able to see that some good had come from all the horror, even though that didn't mean she went on unaffected. I'm happy she and Wells end up together. And the fact that Tate's body was never recovered is chilling. Reminds me of Silence of the Lambs. This was excellent work, Jim
Thank you so, so much Jennifer. Really glad you liked the story and stuck with reading it all the way through. Appreciate the kind words! - Jim
Way to finish strong Jim. I’m ready for the rematch!
Hey, thanks Scott! Appreciate you staying with this story all the way through. - Jim
Not generally a crime fiction guy, but. . .what a read, Jim. You pulled us in all sorts of ways; didn't see that great ending coming. Great characters and terrible bad guys! Enjoy your new year.
Really appreciate the kind words, recommendation and upgrade Ron. I will do my best to earn the trust in me you've shown. Made my week. So glad you liked the story, especially in a genre you don't necessarily prefer. Thanks again for restoring some confidence that wanes sometimes. - Jim
Very welcome, Jim. I'm a bit on the sensitive side and good writing can really amplify that; but it is what it is! This is my first deep dive into your writing and respect here, Jim.
You can't beat a resurrection for an ending. I did not see that coming, in cutoffs or otherwise. Beautiful epilogue, Jim. Loose needed something like that. You did sneak in one disturbing detail: Tate Diller's body was not recovered. Could he still be out there? Can I expect a sequel? :)
Haha, I don't even want to think about a sequel right now to be honest K.C. - I loved writing Loose but man, it's time to move on. At least for now. Sure do appreciate you reading. - Jim
Yesss! That is such a satisfying end! I’d been hoping so hard that Wells wasn’t gone. Now I can sleep well.
....but no one cares that Tate's body was never recovered?? Hmmm. Sleep good Liz, haha - You know how much I appreciate you. Thanks so much. - Jim
Oh, I'm so relieved .... these two were too good together to break.
It's my Christmas present to everyone! Thanks for sticking with this long story M.E. - much appreciated. - Jim
A pleasant surprise to hear that Wells survived and that he and Liv are now together!
Now what is this about Tate's body never being recovered? Oh no. You left that door wide open.
Great job on this one Jim. I'm sorry to see it end.
Wiiide open, Jimbo. Thanks again Jim. Really glad you liked it. - Jim
Oh, thank you Jim. I picked up on Liv's "realistic dreams of losing Wells". I noticed right away that you did not say simply "losing Wells'. But, then, I was looking for a clue, hoping you would keep him alive for those of us who crave a happy ending sometimes . Great story!
Glad you enjoyed it Sharron. Very much appreciate reading and commenting. Thanks again - Jim