Haha. If you knew how long I racked my brain for the right words! Sounds can be tricky sometimes to describe well and not too cartoonish. I hoped I got it right. I appreciate you commenting on that Mel, and thanks for reading. Hope you're enjoying the story overall too. - Jim
Yup. After her Dad died from cancer, she 'changed'. I mentioned it just in passing, a few chapters ago. Turns out it was a big change, a sea change if you will...sorry, that was bad, haha. Thanks as always for reading and commenting Jimbo. Appreciate you. - Jim
Yeah, I'm throwing curveballs and change-ups this inning. Yup, Carla has a closet full of skeletons that nobody knows about. Thanks for reading M.E. and Im glad you liked it! -Jim
Nice suspense-building here, Jim. This chase is going to be intense. Awesome post.
Thank you very much. Glad you like the story and appreciate you sticking with it so far. A couple more Parts probably, and it will be a wrap. - Jim
Again you have left me dangling. Many possibilities. Way to go, Jim! Hurry up with Part 14 so I can breathe.
I'm doing my best K.C. - thanks so much for sticking with this long series. Many possibilities indeed. I'll see what I can do. - Jim
Love it when a sentence prompts sounds inside your brain: "The Evinrude 250 outboard gurgled and grumbled to life."
Haha. If you knew how long I racked my brain for the right words! Sounds can be tricky sometimes to describe well and not too cartoonish. I hoped I got it right. I appreciate you commenting on that Mel, and thanks for reading. Hope you're enjoying the story overall too. - Jim
I know how it is. Think you nailed this time. When I read the sentence I could hear the motor and even smell the gasoline
I will take that to the bank. Appreciate it sir. - Jim
Wait, What? Seems like Carla has a few notches on her belt too. This one keeps getting twistier. I'm enjoying the ride, Jim.
Yup. After her Dad died from cancer, she 'changed'. I mentioned it just in passing, a few chapters ago. Turns out it was a big change, a sea change if you will...sorry, that was bad, haha. Thanks as always for reading and commenting Jimbo. Appreciate you. - Jim
This is thrilling! I love it that Carla is in charge..... so far...
Thanks Sharron, appreciate it. Don't love on Carla too much though...haha. - Jim
Ah, I didn't expect boat trouble ... I didn't expect Carla to be a sick puppy either, well done!
Yeah, I'm throwing curveballs and change-ups this inning. Yup, Carla has a closet full of skeletons that nobody knows about. Thanks for reading M.E. and Im glad you liked it! -Jim