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K.C. Knouse's avatar

The dialog and mannerisms came across as super realistic: brief and to the point. I enjoy these scenes in the station, Jim. Each character had their tics and mannerisms. You moved the plot along with some new clues but saved the plans for the next chapter. Things are on the move. Great job.

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

I saw it all unfold like a movie. Like I was a detective in the room being briefed with all of them. Great cranking of the tension!

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