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Jack Conlan's avatar

This was really nicely done, Jim. I realized the girl was in on it but didn’t expect her to make it part of her life plan. Liked the way you merged the stories too. Very “In Cold Blood” middle America grit. Enjoyed it.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Tammy! What a character you have created, here, Jim. Complex, ruthless, daring. She is sick... but for some reason, I like her. The last three paragraphs are killer.

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