Oh man, the end had me churning with a growing foreboding. Great build up. I love the image of a man slowly coming down the road on a bent Schwinn (I can picture those in our old barns), and ending the story with another image of Mrs. Schuster running in terror down Old Tin Top Rd. makes for a nice cyclical pattern of the story's inevitable direction, one of heightening turmoil into disaster. Thanks for sharing!
Oh man, the end had me churning with a growing foreboding. Great build up. I love the image of a man slowly coming down the road on a bent Schwinn (I can picture those in our old barns), and ending the story with another image of Mrs. Schuster running in terror down Old Tin Top Rd. makes for a nice cyclical pattern of the story's inevitable direction, one of heightening turmoil into disaster. Thanks for sharing!
Hey, thanks for reading and commenting C.M. I really appreciate you taking the time to do that. Glad you liked it. - Jim